https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1CReTR7C2tq2-V_0DWiEAElv4HfhknmMGtaxF1IxbCuQ
this one is my citation
https://docs.google.com/document/pub?id=1JLQeXAralI5XWBa6zGpWVi6WorLNebMnvUkrTfeBDT4
Joe, your paper begins to show me that you have an excellent idea of what happened on 9/11. I would like to work together with you so we can polish up your writing, and make your essays more effective.
One thing you needed to cover more in your essay was the economic effects. Basically, you needed to give me some facts and figures. But the beginning of your essay was fine, and your interview was very good.
You're a pretty sharp guy, and I think we can get your essays to reflect everything you know.
Joe, your paper begins to show me that you have an excellent idea of what happened on 9/11. I would like to work together with you so we can polish up your writing, and make your essays more effective.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you needed to cover more in your essay was the economic effects. Basically, you needed to give me some facts and figures. But the beginning of your essay was fine, and your interview was very good.
You're a pretty sharp guy, and I think we can get your essays to reflect everything you know.
75/100